yoo I quite like this! really like the energy of the characters and the stance of the guy. love that I can feel some kind of cheery/moody but caring (tsundere maybe?) dynamic between the two as well. would be not very sure about the colour palette of the background and how it fits with the characters but I’m just an avid reader so if it fits with your idea for the webtoon, then I think everything’s looking good!
I love the design of the characters. They look dynamic and interesting. I am curious about the Alfalfa hair they each have. The background is a little distracting because the green and black seems to suggest miasma and chaos… I would definitely check out though.
For me, one of the most important aspects of this art (that is lost in some “quick” or “amateur” works) is that the exaggerated features of the characters do not just represent “people moving around a scene” but when used correctly, can convey the character’s emotional state, sometimes even better than a real actor would, and I think you quite succeeded in this (especially with the boy). The girl does seem happy and enthusiastic about something, giving also a sense of achievement but the boy brings out a melancholy, maybe some inner struggle, like he is forced into a fight he does not wish, or having lost something important, or maybe have to protect someone important to him… Really nice job! 🙂
I hope you also have an equally good premise and plot in mind! 😉
yoo I quite like this! really like the energy of the characters and the stance of the guy. love that I can feel some kind of cheery/moody but caring (tsundere maybe?) dynamic between the two as well. would be not very sure about the colour palette of the background and how it fits with the characters but I’m just an avid reader so if it fits with your idea for the webtoon, then I think everything’s looking good!
Amazing. Got a link?
Got a synopsis? And yes, truly a fire cover.
Dude id read it where it at
You got a solid enough art style. Now you gotta make sure that it follows through for each episode itself and have a good enough story.
This guy looks like male Tomoko and I love it!
Im here for it. Fire
I love the design of the characters. They look dynamic and interesting. I am curious about the Alfalfa hair they each have. The background is a little distracting because the green and black seems to suggest miasma and chaos… I would definitely check out though.
Love it
I think it looks awesome. I’ll be looking for you on the front page!
It’s pretty
For me, one of the most important aspects of this art (that is lost in some “quick” or “amateur” works) is that the exaggerated features of the characters do not just represent “people moving around a scene” but when used correctly, can convey the character’s emotional state, sometimes even better than a real actor would, and I think you quite succeeded in this (especially with the boy). The girl does seem happy and enthusiastic about something, giving also a sense of achievement but the boy brings out a melancholy, maybe some inner struggle, like he is forced into a fight he does not wish, or having lost something important, or maybe have to protect someone important to him… Really nice job! 🙂
I hope you also have an equally good premise and plot in mind! 😉
I love the cover!
Awesome keep it up 😀 maybe you can make more detailed background later on. lovely art!
Looks excellent! Definitely do it